“The Dawning of man”
DAWN – CAVE int
Our Tribal man wakes by the smouldering embers of a fire,
Light streams in from the cave entrance. He stands and walks to said entrance.
Our tribal man is strong and confident but old; this morning routine is almost
a reflex to him. He walks to the cave entrance but looks back at where the fire
is and he was sleeping, we see three empty/vacant spaces for people now
abandoned; he turns back to the entrance to the cave and exits into the
enveloping light of day.
DAWN – CLIFF FACE – ext
Our Tribal man crouches by a small pool of water, he looks
down and sees his reflection, his hand goes up to the mud on the ground and
scoops a pile. He proceeds to smear it on his face like tribal
makings/camouflage.
Below the cliff face is a small forest in the centre of a
South American city (or one near the equator/ red bleached world). Our Tribal
man picks up a hand carved spear from beside the cave and tests its durability,
griping it and flexing its body, eyeing the pints sharpness. He walks down the
side of the cliff to entrance to the small forest.
DAWN – FORREST BRUSH – ext
Our Tribal man walks stridently through an invisible path (dense
forest where the camera finds it hard to catch up) he sometimes pauses to look
up at the canopy, light pours in from the sky. He eventually hits the end of
the forest which leads onto a sleepy high street with coffee shops and grocery
stores.
DAWN – MODERN HIGH STREET – ext
Our Tribal man walks along the street, other people ignore
his odd attire, talking on their phones, with friends or driving buy. He enters
a coffee shop and joins the queue.
DAWN – SMALL COFFEE SHOP – int
The coffee shop is decorated along the theme of a
rainforest, promising the ‘freshest beans right on your doorstep’. Our Tribal
man walks receives his black coffee, but in a shallow bowl which he drinks
from, using two hands to cup the bowl, pouring the liquid into his mouth.
DAWN – FOREST RIVER CREEK – ext
Our Tribal man scoops up water with a shallow bowl from the
creek and pours it into his mouth, it splashes on him as much as gets in his
mouth.
DAWN –SMALL COFFEE SHOP – int. Cont
Our Tribal man lowers his coffee bowl and places it on the
table next to him. He picks up his spear and exits the store. But at its
entrance he turns to look at a cardboard cut out of an indigenous tribe all
drinking this shops coffee happily in a weeded wilderness. He turns to continue
his exit.
DAWN – Grocery store – int.
Our Tribal man stalks the isles of the shop, spying other
patrons wearily. Everyone in the store ignores this different behaviour.
Finally he stalks up to the baked good section and thrusts his speer into a
loaf of bread
DAWN – FOREST RIVER CREEK – ext.
Our Tribal man spears a fish, it writhes in pain and
thrashes to get off the spear, he pulls in his catch and stares at the fish.
DAWN – Grocery store – int.
Our Tribal man brings the speared loaf up to his face and
stares at it, hoping to find some sort of answer within it.
DAWN – MODERN HIGH STREET – ext
Our Tribal man walks back towards his forest home, bread on
spear end. He walks past a series of Bulldozers and cranes that are now by the
forest entrance, he ignores them and continues into the forest brush.
DAY – FOREST BRUSH – ext
Our tribal man scavenges the forest for chinks of wood.
Suddenly, he hears something; all his senses go on fill
alert for what the trouble/intruder may be. He grabs his spear (now without the
loaf on it) and rushes to head off the danger.
He confronts a Bulldozer encroaching onto his land, he
tenses his spear throwing arm in preparation to throw, the Bulldozer stops in
its track and the two of them stare each other out.
Day – FOREST CLEARING - ext
In the same position as the last scine, tense and staring
his enemy out, Our tribal man is Verses a mountain lion (insert dangerous
creature) it roars and then backs away.
Day – FOREST BRUSH – ext, cont
The Bulldozer backs off slowly, the more distance the
Bulldozer brings between them the more the tribal man relaxes; he two backs
away, never taking eye contact from the Bulldozer.
NIGHT – CAVE – int
Our tribal man sits infront to of a fire, he pokes at it and
eats a slice of tasted bread. He then lies down to sleep (same position as for
when he woke up) and stares through the fire to where the other empty spaces
for beds are.
In the flickering fire, he sees a family (tribal or contempery?) till the flames go out.
END
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